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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

You see a whore, but I see a craving of human connection.

"Stone her and throw her to the pigs" they say
"She is tainted, unpure."
This is what they will do when they find you naked
with all of your men.
when they see the purple on your skin.
bites on your neck
tissueunder your nails
and your swelled rammed pussy.
They will not understand your
craving for the cock.
You have spaces
spaces that can only be filled
with a man.
You have an ache in your chest
and a longing between your legs
that can only be put to rest
with male dominance and a soft tongue.

Submitted: April 25, 2011

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it's original, and i like the outlook, i'll give you that.

Mon, April 25th, 2011 11:21am


Thank you for the comment. I think it's always important to try and see things from anothers perspective.

Tue, April 26th, 2011 4:30pm


Very different. And like Trjones said, very original.
But I have a question, is there supposed to be repetition on the second to last line?

Sat, May 7th, 2011 1:56pm


Ha!No. I had not noticed that either. Darn dyslexic brain. Fixed. Thanks deary :)

Sat, May 7th, 2011 10:52am

Robert Kerr

Very well expressed. It's incredible how much sensual longing you can describe in so few words.

Sat, October 1st, 2011 10:17am


I just wish I knew where it came from sometimes. Thanks again Robert

Tue, January 24th, 2012 11:58am

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