Friends and foes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

mindless violence

Ceifer and Odin stood on the roof top the were looking into each others eyes. Droplets of water were running down their faces.
"It ends here" Ceifer snarled as he began charging towards Odin. Ceifer was wielding a katana and Odin was unarmed.
As the reached the middle of the roof they lunged at each other. Time seemed to stop for an instant.
as Ceifer fell to the ground .Odin stood over Ceifer's body. Odin's hands were covered in blood.
Odin then picked the katana and used it to imply Ceifer and lifted him up.
Suddenly Ceifer's blue eyes became red as he quickly grabbed Odin's throat. Ceifer's grip was choking Odin.
Then they was an explosion .Ceifer had awakened his tenshi form.
His skin had turned pale his hair had grown longer he now his nail had become sharp claws.
Ceifer punched Odin which slightly cracked Odin's mask.
Ceifer then grabbed Odin throat and started creating a energy ball with the other hand.
"What are you doing ?" asked Odin
"You don‘t wanna know " Ceifer replied.
“How bad could it be?" Odin asked as Ceifer punched his torso.
They was an explosion Ceifer slowly emerged from the smoke.
He stood over Odin's burnt body which had a large hole in the torso.
Odin looked at Ceifer. "That hurt "remarked as he began to grow black fur on his forearms and legs.
He also grew a black wing as his eyes turned yellow. Odin put his palm together and shut his eyes.
He whispered some thing as his wing disappeared and was replaced with four boney skeleton arms.
Odin used the arms on his back to hold onto Ceifer before another arm appeared from Odin's chest and held Ceifer's throat.
Ceifer had no means of escaping and Odin delivered blow to his chest which winded him.
And another to his jaw knock him out.

Ceifer woke up in a small room. He was tied to a chair.
"So your finally awake" Odin remarked.
"What do you want you lowlife" asked Ceifer.
"You took something of mine and I want it back" Odin replied.
"I told you I don't have it ,it was stolen from me "Ceifer confessed.
"By who?" Odin snarled.
"By a group of rogues, I admit I was sloppy but I can help you" Ceifer explained.
"How ?"Odin asked.
"Me and the other blood hound will help you out if you set me free" Ceifer continued.
"Fine but if you betray me and I will rip you apart" Odin snarled.

Odin and Ceifer jumped across the roof top towards the old sewers.
Odin and Ceifer walked trough the sewer for half an hour before reaching a small tunnel.
Odin and Ceifer crawled trough the tunnel and into a room.
They were three people in the room.
"This is my domain" Ceifer bragged.
“Ceifer who the hell is?” asked a man
“Curtis meet my friend Odin “Ceifer replied.
“Friend?” Odin snarled.
“Ouch ! “ said another man.
“Shut up Lupus and get a damn hair cut you look awkward” Ceifer snapped .
“Welcome to our dysfunctional family, by the way I’m Rose” remarked a young woman.
“ Welcome ?, I don’t plan on sticking around . Ceifer owes me a favour and it’s time he paid up.” said a puzzled Odin in a icy voice.

Submitted: July 16, 2009

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Interesting start of story. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

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The text needs to be broken-out into separate paragraphs. With a line skipped between paragraphs. There needs to be a separate paragraph for each time a character speaks, in quotes "", in his/her turn. This will enable you to attract more readers, comments and "I Like It" votes.

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Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Thu, July 16th, 2009 10:26pm


is this the story youre gonna put me and bright into? with the mirror matter and the boom and stuffs?

Fri, July 17th, 2009 2:16pm


seifer... you had to name him seifer?! squalls nemesis?! -slaps head- idiot lol

Fri, July 17th, 2009 2:20pm


if it is whats my character gonna be called?

Fri, July 17th, 2009 2:20pm


Is that it. ._.

Mon, July 20th, 2009 6:11am

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