REVENGE of Jonathan

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

Everything started with the telephone call. Owner of the this phone was a famous detective of the USA. He was Jonathan. The caller was Jonathan’s assistance. The voice of caller was anxious. A murder was commited in the same place that appearingly could not be solved easily. At once he fixed a cup of dark coffee for himself. Because he had to wake up right away. When he woke up he arrived to the crime site. There was an interesting case because dead body was the daughter of the old chief.

REVENGE

 Everything started with the telephone call. Owner of the this phone was a famous  detective of the USA. He was Jonathan. The caller was Jonathan’s assistance. The voice of caller was anxious. A murder was commited in the same place that appearingly could not be solved easily. At once he fixed a cup of dark coffee for himself. Because he had to wake up right away. When he woke up he arrived to the crime site. There was an interesting case because dead body was the daughter of the old chief. Killer cut her left arm. However there was no sign. There were neither fingerprints nor any signs. As a result of all investigations there were no signs. Did the most famous detective of city become unsuccesful? He thought that he couldn’t sleep until the murder was solved. He had never encountered such a professional killer. It would be the time for  him either not to sleep or to ignore the case at the expense of his job. In the past he met with professional killer however every time he was succesful. Investigation proved that the suspect didn’t kill the girl. He just made her faint;and when he cut her arm,she woke up.As a result of the pain she was shocked. Blood pressure was increasing and it ruined her brain. When they were investigating the first murder, they received news about a second murder. This homocide was awayat the other enterence of city. At first Jonathan didn’t want to get the case. However those murders had a common point.Dead body was an acquantiance of old chief. Those chiefs worked together with Jonathan for a while. When all that happened, he never thought of his daughter.After his wife dead, he just had his daughter. It was the third murder in the same day. That time killer murdered a girl at the other side of the city. He again killed the victim without any sign. From that point on everbody knew that all were murdered by the one and  the same person. When they arrived crime site they realized that dead body had no legs. Everbody understood something however no one could understand what his purpose was? He didn’t realize that he was at risk. That man changed the meaning of a serial murderer. In past nobody had ever done so much killing as this man. The turn came for the last murder. Despite Jonathan was fast,killer was faster than him. Those murders which was cause of Jonathan’s headache, in that time affected him deeply. Killer murdered three people in ten hours. Those were very extraordinary murders. Because, the time span between crime sites was already nine hours. It means the killer killed three people in one hour.’How he could  succeed that?’ Because that short was not enough to  to get a hold of victims needless to mention any killing. When all these happened Jonathan’s phone was ringing. That was seemingly his daughter’s calling. But the voice on the phone was not his daughter. The voice said that ‘Game over’. Jonathan tried to understand what had happened. In that time, as a result of incoming call they went to center of city. Because there was a dead body there. When Jonathan arrived the spot, he saw his daughter’s  face. But those arms and legs were not part of his daughter’s body. His phone rang again. The killer was in Police Department and said that ‘If Jonathan comes here, I will tell everything’. When Jonathan arrived Police Department, he wanted to attack man, however he was surrounded by police. From that point  on everything was solved. Killer started to tell everything ‘’Two years ago when I was a doctor in New York Hospital, my lover was killed. The police made a group to solve that murder. However the police couldn’t find the killer.  So I lost my temper. I thought I should have made you feel the same. So I did everything.’’

Oguzhan YILDIZ


Submitted: March 30, 2012

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