Submitted: January 22, 2009
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i also wanted to mention that i like this b/c even tho you put it in the "gay and lesbian" genre, it's easily read through the eyes of any sexuality. i really liked it. but again, i already said that....
Thu, January 22nd, 2009 10:51pmi liked this, i think the only thing that could do with re doing is the ending maybe?
really enjoyed it.
I'll let you write the ending - thanks for reading
Sat, January 24th, 2009 8:08pmsex wonderful is that all gay people talk about
Tue, August 18th, 2009 7:51amVery good... wanted more.. :)
Thu, February 18th, 2010 7:54pmIt's really nice, but it needs work on the ending. Enjoyed it very much.
Tue, April 27th, 2010 9:24amo.O" woah...
Fri, May 14th, 2010 9:33pmxD Very good.
I liked the ending, it was a good build up.
Interesting topic.
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i'm not sure what to think about this!!!! it's a very good piece, it's fun to read tho i do feel the ending could use some work as i want it to go on further. anyways, i think i like it b/c i'm torn between remembering how it feels to be attracted to a teacher and now being an adult and realizing the inappropriateness of student-teacher relations. either way, very cool. i'll have to check out more of your stuff!!!!! the bulge indeed....write on!
Thu, January 22nd, 2009 10:50pm