Poem by: Olola
Genre: Young Adult
child, motherhood, arguments, family feuds, disagreements
Submitted: April 19, 2008
Mum is just your name.
Motherhood is just your job.
Me, I'm just your responsibility.
But there is no love.
© Copyright 2016 Olola. All rights reserved.
Eric JHRB Egan
Wow, very personal, I do not know what to say.
Thanks Eric - it is very personal as I was very angry when I wrote this. Thanks a lot. Olola
awww, that's really sad. Nicely written, very straight froward. I felt a pang in my heart reading it. Sad and lovely ma belle. Good job.
Thanks a lot Steph. That was exactly what I wanted everyone to feel; sad and I wanted it to be straight forward because when I wrote this, that was exactly what I felt. Thanks again and I will definately be checking out your work. Olola.
Wow, I know how you feel, sometimes I get so mad that kind of thing comes in my mind! good work!
Thanks a lot Wandiola! Olola.
I know how you feel-well, felt after looking at the date.
I feel like I'm just weighing everyone down with my prescence.
ANyways, i loved it. It was simple, and meaningful.
Thanks a lot and I'm glad you could relate to it. I just wanted the poem to be straight to the point and powerful but simple. Olola.
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