How Do You WIn my Dear

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
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Submitted: July 08, 2008

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Many writers spill their words, on this site to find their worth

Others words create a fire, comments gush, knowone tires

To start so low to climb the ladder, I  like yours, does that matter

Many reads with not to say, is it crap, please, please do say

Add more fire, add more tears, thow in some love thow in more fear

Is that enough to gain your attention, unspoken rule that is not broken

So try and try and try we must, please read our work and move us up


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