Hearts Desire

Poem by: OnFireForGod

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Have you ever loved someone so much but they never knew you did. Everytime you see them your heart speeds up. You think it's fly out of your chest. Thats what this poem is about!! Tell me what you think!!!

When you look at me

My hear skips a beat

A glance, a smile

That's all it takes

When I picture you

I can't imagine you

With anyone but me

So why can't you

Feel the same way

Why her and not me

I ask myself this daily

If only you could see inside my heart

See the pain, feel the pain

It's like no other pain

Nothing can compare to it

Though I know it will never happen

I dream, wish, and hope

That someday you'll feel the same

Submitted: December 15, 2009

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MissCosti

Hey (:
I really liked this. I think that the three's you used were really effective, and it was simple but full of emotion.
"If only you could see inside my heart, see the pain, feel the pain"- I loved that bit.
Was really good :)
xx

Fri, December 18th, 2009 9:28pm

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thanks so much!!

Sun, December 20th, 2009 5:33pm

thegirlwhofallsdownalot

i liked this one a lot more, i found it way more relatable... not just to me but to a broader spectrum of people in general, it reminded me how wishing can be so addicitive, how once you start you have trouble being grateful and satisfied.. all together splendid

Mon, December 21st, 2009 2:42am

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thank you soooooo much!!!

Sun, December 20th, 2009 7:01pm

Jesusluv96

*Sigh!* I feel the same exact way. I love your way of writing! It's short, sweet, and to the point! Yet very good and full of emotion! That's why I like about your writing style! Great job!

God bless!
•Jesusluv96•

Wed, March 3rd, 2010 6:22pm

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haha...thanks...GOD BLESS YOU TOO
OnFireForGod :)

Wed, March 3rd, 2010 2:14pm