Picture Challenge for PeaceLoveLingleton

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Josh was just holding Anna in his arms,

What happened?

Where had she gone?

All this hurt,

Where there was once love and joy,

Lonliness is the only thing left in his aching heart,

He yearned to hold her one last time,

Tears flow rapidly down his face,

Alone in this empty hallway is his new life,

He has nothing more to do

Except wish Anna was there,

He longed to run his fingers through her golden lockes,

Kiss her tender lips,

But she's not there,

He's left with pain and lonliness,

In this empty hallway


Submitted: December 22, 2009

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Mistress of Word Play

A very nice write. Goes well with the picture. Good luck with the challenge. Merry Christmas. Susan :)

Tue, December 22nd, 2009 9:08pm

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Thank You!!! Merry Christmas to you too!!!

Tue, December 22nd, 2009 6:04pm

angellynn

Oh this is so sad.(sobbing)Very well written. Relates to the picture perfectly. Good Luck!
Angellynn:)

Wed, December 30th, 2009 1:17am

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thank sooo much!!! :)

Tue, December 29th, 2009 9:06pm

Ramiz Gjini

very beautiful!! I would love it if you could comment on my writing and ill be happy to read any of your material...just keep me updated..thank u
-ramiz

Tue, January 12th, 2010 1:08am

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thanx so much & i'll be sure to check u out!!!

Mon, January 11th, 2010 9:52pm

flylash

Oh wow. This was truly amazing, I could feel his hurt and confusion. The poem matched with the picture perfectly, yet taking a step further from the obvious which I thought was a fantastic skill that you have. Great job! :D

Sat, February 20th, 2010 2:11am

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Thanks a bunches!

Sat, February 20th, 2010 9:36am

Jesusluv96

Gosh! Your writing is so good! It's (I know I say this a lot, but it's true!) short, sweet, and to the point! I love how you described all of this! You did an amazing job! I wish you well! Although the contest is most likely already over, I still think you did an amazing job!

God bless!
•Jesusluv96•

Wed, March 3rd, 2010 6:26pm

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thanks and yes the contest is over but she never picked a winner bc booksie deleted the page it was on and all the comments
OnFireForGod :)

Wed, March 3rd, 2010 2:15pm

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