Inventing My Nightmare

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Commercial Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

This piece of literature is hard to describe but it is relating to those who's hearts are broken and the way they feel.

She said she loves me, she broke my heart. I slit my wrist's I fall apart.

I sit here now in my burning ashes, with no tomorow, no regret. I go as low as low can get.

When you said you loved me, you didnt mean it, broken hearted lifes not needed.

Contemplating with Satin, burning in Hell. How much time do i have left? Only time can tell.

My heart grows numb, imune to pain. When u said you loved me, it was all a game.

My hearts in piece's, my relentless range will the the end of you, as you play these grave digging games.

Its a game of taunting, a game of rage. You have crushed my soul, you have locked my cage.

Forgoten me in your nightmares, I've been left for dead, crushed buy these games you've played inside my head.

To many nights spent awake, pondering, wondering, and contemplating your fate.

Dying slowly, buy death and hate. As the Angles cry for my fate.

Submitted: August 07, 2009

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Fri, August 7th, 2009 10:01am


Thank you very much for your support, if you would please tell other people about my writing

Fri, August 7th, 2009 8:44am


This lady hurt you real bad .
Is she worth the anguish you express here.
they that hate only succeeds when you begin to hate back.
It is a very well composed piece .
Perhaps it is too adventurous of any of us to try to pack so much emotional punch into such a small piece. Then again ; would a longer piece bring you any more solace .And again Is she worth it.
Its easy to say ' get over it ' but none of us really know how hurt you are / were .
Keep writing . It is always a good way to reconcile the troubled thoughts inside your head. and more often than not it contextualises the hurt, in terms of its gravity.
I feel I am a good deal older than you but as they say here ;
You Rock - which I gather is intended to mean ' Bravo '
If it doesn't mean that , let me say it . Well done .

Sat, August 15th, 2009 7:31pm


thank you? but i wasnt ever hurt im only 14 im not old enough to hold as much emotional pain that is with drawn in this piece.I'm just trying to relate to those who have gone through so much pain that would bring them as low as to feel this way. but i understand what you were saying, i am glad there are people like you who try to help people and make them understand there feelings, although i wasn't referring to me in the piece. do not feel your words were wasted. i know what your trying to say and what your words mean.

Tue, August 18th, 2009 7:38pm

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