Just Tonight

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Another poem that i wrot
Hope you like it :)


It's been a little too long
Since i've been acting strong

But now I've had enough of it
Now I'm losing my spirit

So just for tonight
I won't act bright

I won't act like I'm fine
Probably cry from seven to nine

Just tonight i will let out my sadness
And later continue wit the act of gladness

Just tonight I'll out my tears
Just tonight I will show my fears

And when the morning comes again
I will hide my pain

Sunlight will hide my blue
My tears, pain, fear and bruises too

So only tonight 
I will act not so alright 


Submitted: April 02, 2012

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Blues* sorry for the misitake :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 2:52pm


I can't relate to this poem a whole lot! I really enjoyed this, and I like how you say just for tonight! Because when the Sun rise again everything will be alright. Nice :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 6:52pm


Thanks alot
Even i can relate to it (a bit)
Well i was really sad the other day
And since i couldnt cry in front of others and show that im not happy
I had to wait for the night
But i couldnt really keep it all in
ANd thats when i wrote this poem :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:57am


Oh. My. God! This is sooooo great! I love it! :D

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 8:42pm


Thanks alot
it means the world to me =D

Tue, April 24th, 2012 3:26am

Ian Dawn

Very tight nicely done
Graet rhythem and rhyme

Tue, May 1st, 2012 2:31am


Thanks alot

Tue, May 1st, 2012 3:21am

fallen words

nice keep writing

Tue, May 1st, 2012 9:40am


Thanks alot =D

Tue, May 1st, 2012 3:21am

Kim Hyun Zubi

Wah~ Charesso alu-she :)
Keep it up! (Y)

Tue, May 15th, 2012 4:02pm


Kumao Zubi-Shay :)

Tue, May 15th, 2012 10:03am

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