Peaceful Place

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Some thought..

Where he stand's

Was once my place

Nothing came between me and this space

My once place

Stood for peace

Stood for thought

What he doesn't know

Was my broken heart once hurt

My tear's were shed

Most for him

No more does this place sease

But my heart is forever caught

It lay's in pieces

Waiting to be brought into one

By that one who will really care

That wont shun

Only his stare

Will leave me speechless and in thought

What was once my chance

Has disappeared

This place had been my support, my shelter

Only now it's a reminder

Both still I remain confused

for how I feel for you.


Submitted: October 03, 2008

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smoizza

A lovely thought on love. Emotional as well as reflective.

Sun, October 5th, 2008 1:17am

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Thank you very much.

Mon, October 6th, 2008 7:26am

seesawmae

wow, this is awesome, great emotional expression!

Sun, October 5th, 2008 8:06pm

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thank you

Mon, October 6th, 2008 7:27am

lunalupinacci

C.C.!!! :D I love this, really - it haas a magical quality to it that I adore. I can't quite put my finger on it....I get a picture of a girl standing somewhere quiet in the mist or something when I read this. That's just me, but....haha, you are one heck of a writer. This is beautiful. My favourite part was "my heart is forever caught...." Very original, very deep.

Mon, October 6th, 2008 3:38pm

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WoW thank you so much I actually was a little self-concience about this poem..

thank you

Mon, October 6th, 2008 10:46am

Marathongman

Only now it's a reminder

Both still I remain confused

for how I feel for you.

Nice writing

Mon, October 6th, 2008 9:33pm

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Thank you! =D

Mon, October 6th, 2008 4:14pm

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