to death and back

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic
a man wakes up after a hard night and finds himselff in an empty bar...

Submitted: September 09, 2010

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in a bar where all i can see is blood and guts, all i hear is a shot gun beaing fired and the moans and groans of the dying peeople surrounding me, all i can smell is the coagulated blood of the people around me.SUDDENLY! I awake from the nightmare to scared to go back to sleep as i fear the nightmare may continue, i get out of bed and go downstairs to find myself standing in a mirror with a shotgun in my hand i look down ro find nothng there, i carry on walking it until i get to the kitchen, i smell bacon, i walk over to the oven to find a bowlof bacon with a note i read aloud "EAT OR DIE!", so i graba  fork and start scoffign down the bacon, but as i chew i realise its not bacon but brains, i spit it all over a man ina  black cloak with a sythe,as i start running i fall in to a chair only to find that i was still in the bar, my breath reaked of stale wisky, i pull my hands of the cold sticky leather chair, turn around to see what looks like a disco which had never ended the music player stuck on the words "look behind you, look behind you" i turn unsteadily where i see nothing but a mirror, in it i see myself and a figure i cant make out, i turn around this time i fall over  and stumble upon a warm gun whch i put in my pocket as i stand up the man with the sythe returns but his black cloak which is now covered in blood, he swings his sythe at me as he mutters the words "you were warned" i reply back "so were you" "bang"! i shoot him dead suddunly i awake once more in my bed trembling with FEAR!.


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