VISITORS

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

My story tells about unexpected visitors.

 

VISITORS

 

 There are times that you never want  to live and people who you never want them to exist and that night I felt just like that .I wished I had never seen those men and hoped that these all be a dream but I couldn’t change reality. I saw those men and all my life changed.

 

 Training with coach ended very late that night.My house was not so far so I decided to use the shortcut.It was so cold.I shawled my scarf and started to walk in quick steps.I heard the voices of two men having a quarrel.I started to watch them silently.I recognized they were arguing about essential situation.I didn’t know why I walked toward them but I did.When they saw me they stopped talking suddenly.However they were neither shocked nor scared they were happy as they saw an old acquitance.I said :”Is there any problem?” One of them said to other man :”I told you.He used this way because today is Monday!” I couldn’t understand what happened in there.The sophisticated and the elder one said:”We were waiting for you, my dear son.”

 

I didn’t expect hearing these.What was going on here? Without giving me any me chance  to think they made me got into a car. Almost fifty seconds later the man made a magic by circling his hands and everywhere was covered with colorful lights. Suddenly I found myself in a place where I had never been before.You would be shocked If you heard what they told me.It was all nonsense.

 

This place was not so different from our world. However,I knew it, I was not in the world. Everything was perfect, nothing seemed real. Sun glittered like a huge yellow diamond in the sky.I felt like trees watching me. There was an awesome smell. Even that perfection was not enough to relax me. My legs were shivering because of fear and I had  no idea about what would happen to me. Men sat on the chair and started to tell me everything :”Listen to me my dear son. My name is Howard. I know your mind is mixed.I am going to tell you everything. That is a long long story. Your grandfather is the reason for everything.He was a good man. Unfortunately he made a big mistake. Everyone could make a mistake however his mistake was unforgiven. He risked all of us. He trusted a woman and her love. You know the most dangerous thing is love. It harmed him and would almost harm us. Do you understand me?” “I can’t understand you. Everything is absurd for me. It is meaningless.” He took a breath deeply and smiled grief.  “Open your mind my son. Because this is what you need the most.If you can do it, everything becomes easy for you to understand. Now with your permission. I will go on telling the story. We have to punish him. Unfortunately our rules require this.Your grandfather was my bestfriend.I wanted to warn him.I wanted to protect him.However he never listened to me.At the end he lost what he had.Even he had no personal life.”

“What have you done to him! Have you killed him?”  “Of course no! We won’t do this kind of things. We took the perception of time and place from his hand.Because of this, he wakes up in a different place and time everyday.” “It is not possible. Are you kidding me?”

“My saying is to open your mind.Now you are in here you think is it possible? Firstly you should get this that we are not in the world. Everything is possible in here. Different world means different rules my dear son.”“Assume that I believe you.What are all these to do with me.My grandfather made a mistake and you punished him.So ?” “I am gonna ask to you one thing.You know that where are you father?” “I don’t know and I don’t care.He left me and my mother.When I was kid.” “No he didn’t leave you and your mother.He just payed for what his father did.” “Are you aware what your talking?”  “I am aware and I am so sorry.But you will pay for what your gfandfather did too.” “Did I understand right.My father was punished because of my grandfather.He did nothing.He didn’t deserve this.You can imagine growing up without a father and I did nothing too.” “I know this and I know the rules too.I have to do this for regulation.A visiter’s son is a visiter.It goes like that.”  “So , you will take the persistence of time from my hand.I become a visiter.”  “Yes.You should close your eyes.I am gonna put my hand on your head.You feel like you fly.Until this sense perishes don’t open your eyes.”

He did what he said.I had no time to objection.I opened my eyes in a different place.My story began like that.Now you know everything.I am visitor for ten years.I have been lost in the time.Today I am in America in 1720.Unfortunately I don’t know how I will wake up or where I will be tomorrow.I have no my own life.This punishment is a heritage from my grandfather.

Somethings might be crazy but It doesn’t mean it’s not real.If you happen to get somebody with manners in your life for just one day,think maybe they are visiters just like me and the most important one is that ; Open your mind. Because you will need that.


Submitted: April 08, 2012

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