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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic
A girl gets abducted in the middle of the night by her boyfriend, Will it all be ok, or is she in grave danger.

Submitted: May 02, 2014

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“I – I can’t see, why I can’t see, Jay… I’m scared. What’s happening, what are you doing to me, Jay stop it, you’re hurting me”. “Shut up, be patient” He whispered softly into my wet cold ear. “But-Jay” I whimpered my heart beating faster and faster.  “I said shut up”.

We were moving fast, too fast to be in a car; there was a blindfold and a helmet on my head so I guessed we were on a motorbike. My shaking hands clasped around his hard stomach. I buried my head into his back trying hard not to panic. Jay and I had been together since high school, for about four years to be precise. He had never been like this towards me.

He had come into my room through the window, and woken me up in the middle of the night. As soon as I opened my eyes and kissed him he had tied a blindfold around my head, and thrown me over his shoulders, out into the rain.

“Jay” I whispered “what’s going on, please tell me, I won’t be angry I-I promise, I love you babe”.  “Do you though” he hissed his voice low and questioning. “Yes of course, of course I do honey, what’s wrong”. “Nothing, I just… don’t worry”. He said his voice normal again, “Then please can you tell me what’s going on?” I waited for an answer but nothing was said, then slowly I heard a laugh a low frightening laugh. “It’s a surprise” he hissed harshly in my ear.

Panic took over as I tried to get off the bike, I knew it was stupid and would probably kill me but the adrenaline made my mind go blank. I screamed and screamed in his ear, “Let me go, let me go” as I struggled and tried to get out of his grip, our speed, increased.  “Calm down” he yelled.

“Let, me go” I begged “Just shut up” He screeched.  I began to cry I was so afraid, was he going to kill me, was he taking me somewhere, or was he just playing with me, I had no idea. He stopped the bike, lifting me off the back and in too his arms, he brushed my wet hair behind my ears, and kissed me, lying me on the ground onto something soft but thin. 

He pushed me hard undressing me slowly, savouring every moment, kissing every part of me. “What’s going on, what are you doing” I sighed my breath getting heavier, “You’ll see,” he laughed. As soon as I started to get into it, thinking it was just some new fetish thing for him that he wanted to try out. He put something over me; he picked me up and brushed my hair, after a few minutes he began to put things in it. Then he gently kissed my lips and whispered “Done”.

“Done? What’s done?”  “You are babe” I began to freak out again, but before I really started to panic, he undid the blindfold. As I looked around me at my surroundings, I realised where we were, we were in the park, where we had our first kiss. He was dressed in the same clothes as that day, and had dressed me in the same outfit that I had warn.

“What’s going on?” I asked with tears forming in my eyes. “I have a question for you”, he smiled, I had a feeling I knew what he was going to ask. He got down on one knee, pulling out a bag of sweets; he said a nervous look in his brown eyes. “Tears fell from my light green eyes, in the bag was a ring, a beautiful shining ring, in the shape of a star. “Sophie Nina Tomik, You are my shining star, I love you more than anything in the universe.  Will you marry me?”

I fell to my knees next to him, wrapping my arms around him, I kissed his lips softly, crying yes over and over into his lips. He laughed kissing me back, “I’m so glad you said that, I was so scared, that after all I put you through you would say no.” “Of course I wouldn’t, but you did scare the hell out of me, please don’t ever do that again. “Haha sorry, I just didn’t want you to know what my plan was".


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