Did I See Mr. Who?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

Here it is, the final part of a trilogy that started with Monthly Abandon and was continued through How Many Days In A Month? and is now concluded in the final part "Did I see Mr. Who?". I hope anyone that reads gets some enjoyment out of it. And I know that there is room for another part, so if anyone wants another part just let me know and I'll see what I can do.

Did I See Mr. Who?

Mr. K ran through the house after him.

He jumped and tackled Saturday to the ground,

Pointed his handgun at his head and painted the walls red.

Saturday killed June.

February is in jail with his new cell mate

And unwanted lover Mr. R.

Wednesday found Mrs. F with Mr. N

Behind the nightclub

And the next day they were found

Bludgeoned with a cricket bat.

March finally made his way back

To the K-Mart he was arrested in

With a bomb strapped to his chest

And blew that shop to the new world.

Monday visited the place where May

Painted the pavement red and she was found

By Mr. L and granted a new life in crime.

December married the prince of England

And decided to secretly kill them all

So she could become the New Queen.

Mr. M was chasing Mr. Fanhappyliveagaylife

Down the street so he could kill the man

Who killed his family, but lost him.

He asked a little old man if he had seen Mr. Fanhappyliveagaylife run by,

But the little old man only replied,

"Did I see Mr. Who?".

Submitted: January 22, 2009

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woah!!! That was hularious! lol

Sat, February 7th, 2009 5:01pm


Thank you.

Yeah, it's meant to be funny. It's not a serious story, so I'm glad you laughed at it.

Cheers. :)

Sat, February 7th, 2009 5:48pm


Ha! I love the character's names in this short story. Very creative. :)

Fri, February 13th, 2009 3:53pm


Thank you! I liked to use them names, any of them could have a strong and disturbing history behind them. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Fri, February 13th, 2009 7:59am


Very good

Sat, February 14th, 2009 5:24am


Thank you :)

Sat, February 14th, 2009 3:06am


lol, fecund imagination

Wed, March 4th, 2009 6:32pm


Haha, thank you!

Wed, March 4th, 2009 6:56pm

Midnight Rose

Very gifted indeed! Superb imagination! Kudos! :0)M

Sun, March 8th, 2009 1:38pm



Sun, March 8th, 2009 6:51am


I love the flow and the circular feel to your prose writing. The rhyme takes you along in a up beat tempo whilst the subject matter just gets darker and dark. Great writing. This isn't critism, but maybe you could look at the punctuation or not it's great as it is. Look forward to reading more.

Sat, April 18th, 2009 7:52pm


Yeah, the punctuation could do with a little update. I've been tyring to do that with all of my stuff here on Booksie, I might get around to this one one day.

Yeah, it does get more and more darker :P That's the way I like it. Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it. Cheers mate!

Sun, April 19th, 2009 6:40am

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