An Ice Cream poem

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

A quick little poem about --you guessed it--ICE CREAM!

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Ice cream, Ice cream,
Oh how you do me wrong
I'd like to lose some pounds
instead you pack them on.
 
~~~
 
You know that you're my fave,
Chocolate is the best
but sherbet gets its way
at my tongues request.
 
~~~
 
I hope you never melt
and leave me all alone
cause I just bought a crate
of haagen-daz for home.
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Always eat your Ice Cream in moderation and get in your exercise. Don't forget to eat your fuits and veggies, they're important! And brush those teeth, cavities hurt!

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Submitted: July 07, 2009

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Andre Wise

Lol, that was funny

Tue, July 7th, 2009 3:44am

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Thanks Andre.

Sun, September 27th, 2009 9:54am

Wanhala

HAHA! This is adorable and it flows so perfectly. Props.

Tue, July 7th, 2009 5:33am

Author
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Thanks Wanhala for your compliment.

Sun, September 27th, 2009 9:55am

MercedesBbenz

haha I had my dad read this poem. It's a perfect poem for him :)

Tue, July 7th, 2009 7:01pm

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Thank you MercedesBbenz for your comment.

Sun, September 27th, 2009 9:57am

palewriter

Thanks, glad you liked it.

Tue, July 7th, 2009 8:56pm

SLJONES

what a great poem well done loved it sj

Mon, July 20th, 2009 3:46pm

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Thanks SJ

Wed, August 5th, 2009 6:58pm

Professor Iconoclast

Why is each line its own stanza?

Wed, July 29th, 2009 10:48pm

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I didn't use word. I sat at the computer and wrote the poem in 10 minutes and didn't think anyone would care or like it.
I'd spent so much time on the others, and funny enough, this is more popular then they are!

Wed, July 29th, 2009 6:02pm

Professor Iconoclast

That's cool, I was just starting to notice stanza breaks after every line as a pattern with others on this site and it was starting to get under my skin. I really dig the flow of the revision. Keep on truckin'

Sat, August 1st, 2009 11:33pm

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If it wasn't for you bringing that up I never would have figured out the copy and paste stuff. Thank you professor, I've revised all of my poems now and feel better about. I still need a hell of alot more experience in writing and how this site works but I'm trying. Please comment again if something seems wrong.

Sat, August 1st, 2009 6:28pm

Baz

Hee hee! Nice one, palewriter. Ice cream is my downfall too. Brilliant!

Mon, August 3rd, 2009 8:58am

Author
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Thanks Baz, This has turned out to be my most popular poem. And it only took ten minutes! If only they were all that easy!

Mon, August 3rd, 2009 6:37am

bloppieblipp

love this poem its super funny and talks about my favorite food ice-cream.

Sat, September 12th, 2009 10:55pm

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Thanks Bloppie, This has turned out to be my most popular poem. I didn't know if anyone would like it so I wasn,t going to post it. Now i'm glad I did. Glad you liked it.

Sat, September 12th, 2009 6:35pm

Jazzie

haha thats cute.

Fri, October 9th, 2009 9:42pm

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Thank you, I thought so myself. LOL

Fri, October 9th, 2009 3:49pm

Mademoiselle Jolie

hahaha WOW..... XD

This was cute, I like it :)

Tue, October 13th, 2009 10:33pm

Author
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This is my most popular poem, evrybody seems to like this one. Perhaps it's because Ice Cream is a universal favorite with people. Thanks for your comment and glad you saw this one Sam.

Tue, October 13th, 2009 6:18pm

rnh118

Cute and Delicious.

Thu, December 31st, 2009 4:20pm

Author
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Thanks again, maybe I'll go and get some now.

Thu, December 31st, 2009 9:25am

NazireC

aaa haagen daz. My mouth is watering right now. Its probably the best poem written about ice cream.

Sun, January 10th, 2010 6:15pm

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Ha Ha, Thanks Nazire, It may not really be the best poem written about Ice Cream, But it is my most popular poem. Ha Ha I appreciate the comment.

Sun, January 10th, 2010 12:05pm

li fu

Dude you have skills

Fri, January 22nd, 2010 12:46am

Author
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Haha, I appreciate that Li, Thanks for reviewing my most popular poem.

Thu, January 21st, 2010 7:27pm

mommy3

hehe this was funny. After reading this I now want to go buy Hagen-daz ice cream. I love ice cream one of my biggest downfalls of losing weight. good job with this poem. Jessica :)

Fri, February 5th, 2010 3:18am

Author
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It sounds like you've got the same problem I have--I'll just have one bowl and that'll be it, then I'll start working out again. I can't tell you how many times I've said that. Haha. Thanks Jessica.

Thu, February 4th, 2010 7:25pm

Mistress of Word Play

Loved it! My favorite thing besides chocolate. Nicely penned. Susan :)

Sun, February 14th, 2010 9:52pm

Author
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Thanks Susan, I wish all my poems were as popular as this one. It must be a very popular treat for so many people to relate to it.

Mon, February 15th, 2010 5:11am

BLOODTHIRSTY

ICE CREAM ICE CREAM WE ALL SCREAM FOR ICE CREAM. lol. I like this alot. I just had italin ice cream im not going to try and spell the name of it. But it was great. I love this poem and i love ice cream. lol.

BLOODTHIRSTY

Mon, February 15th, 2010 6:08pm

Author
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Thank you Blood, I'm really glad you liked it and by the number of people who've read it I'm really glad I wrote it. LOL

Mon, February 15th, 2010 11:47am

preppy ninja

mmmm icecream, please don't make me hungry, lol, nice poem

Sun, February 21st, 2010 1:36pm

Author
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Haha, Thank you Preppy, Just don't read my other food poems and you won't be stay hungry. Haha

Sun, February 21st, 2010 7:21am

CrystalOxxi

lol, the story of every girl with taste's life right?

Fri, April 9th, 2010 11:00am

Author
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Ice Cream is certainly a food that is universely liked by everyone isn't it. Thanks for the comment Crystal.

Fri, April 9th, 2010 6:25am

butterfly14

haha that was funny =)

Thu, April 15th, 2010 6:08pm

Author
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Well thank you very much Butterfly, I'm glad you thought so. Thanks for stopping by.

Thu, April 15th, 2010 1:39pm

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