Poem by: palewriter
nature, life, poem
Submitted: January 19, 2010
taps my window as I pause
dancing off the leaf's
fluttering in the garden
and off the bluejays bright wings.
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... Very cute.
Oh nice, you just gave me the "bird" didn't ya. ;)
Hahaha, Good one john! LOL and then LOL some more.
Shorties are all the rage it seems
I've noticed. I've been meaning to learn something new outside the box. Someday I'll try a Haiku. I've noticed someone doing it on the other site.
Short and sweet :))
Good Job Tim :D
Thnk you vetti mooch. Sam.
Short and sweet sj
Like Irwin said, the short ones seem to be catching on these days.
heres a poem i loved ur poem and wanna no if im good at poems
way up in the tree
There is lots and lots to see,
Trees have lots of leaves.
That fall below during time,
it brings me lots of fun things
Wow, what a wonderful little poem you have. I think it was very good and you should do more. Thank you for liking my poem.
Interesting one. I can't really do these type of poetry. Free verse is the only thing that works for me as it seems. I am envious of you.
Some of us find certain types of poetry easier and more fitting to our styles. Free verse is something you excel at and do with a high level of intelligence. I, in fact, envy you.
so beautiful, calming one !! I certainly lobe blue jays too! I have a blue jay short story, Incredible Joy, Lovingly Sent. Take a look at it, you'll be very surprised!! Bye for now, Vincey.
Thanks again Vincey.
Well done! I find these types of writing interesting. A moment in time captured, lightly expounded upon...then a little nestle of images to follow me after reading. Fun, really.
Interesting and well done! :)
Appreciate that snow, thank you very much.
Beautiful yet so endearing short but not small in stature,a profound piece of writing."Oh look it's raining on my window ledge."
Haha, perfect timing. Thanks for reading Nekolas, it's nice to see someone comment on one of the old ones.
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