Poem by: palewriter
humor, life, poem
Submitted: January 19, 2010
Thank you to JWB for coming up with Dad instead of Sam.
A girl, she had
To wed, a man
Quite sure, she found
Till he, left her
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That works. I like it, you have issues, get help, me too. hahaha
I promise I will. haha
... Now that's funny. Good job. You get my vote too.
Haha, Thank you JB.
Hahahaha wow, I liked this, it made me laugh :DDDDD
Thanks Sammy, JB's suggestion really made it what it is. Haha
loved it sj
hahaah, wow! That's disturbing! xD
Haha, I'm sure it was for her. Thanks snow, I guess. ha
Adorable and sweet!!! It made me giggle, well done!!!
Haha, I giggled myself, thanks.
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You did so good on this one. You should team up with James more often the dynamic duo of poetry! You get a laugh, a giggle, and the good button up there. Susan :)
Thank you Susan.
haha.I don't know whether I should feel sad for the girl, if I should laugh, or should be disturbed. All in your ability to write.
I suppose laughing would be my recommendation. haha
.......I'm not sure I understand this poem. I re read it a couple times, and I'm just lost on the meaning. O.o but it sounded good by way of rhythm! It was very consistent...I just don't get the joke. It's probably something really obvious and I'm going to be mad at myself when I look back like, "Oh! Duh...." but...right now I don't get it lol
She thought she found a guy to marry but he turned out gay!!! He likes her father instead! LOL
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