Disturbed By Forbidden Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A forbidden love story.

As the darkness sets in

I am alone here in my room

Thinking of you

Thinking of the way I feel about you

We’re friends I know

But a crazy feeling is ruling over me

And it’s my love for you

Why? Is it wrong to love you?

It’s not wrong

But sad to say you love somebody else

You love her that much

I want to give you the whole world

To give you everything I have

Even my soul

By just the way you touch her

It shatters my heart into pieces

I should have known better

That during times like this

I should run

Cry out of self-pity

For I know this feeling

Is forbidden love

Submitted: October 15, 2010

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You sum up the emotions so well =]

Sat, October 16th, 2010 2:18am


thanks! I wrote it out of a sad experience.when I loved the wrong person when I was 13. thanks for the comment!

Sat, October 16th, 2010 1:59pm


highly charged emotions and a great sense of wanting and the turmoil of love.a great poem.
nighthawk :)

Sat, October 16th, 2010 3:13am


hey, it's you again!:] thanks for the comment. it's from my past experience and i can't get away from it. thanks a lot!!!

Sat, October 16th, 2010 2:02pm


Amazing poem!
it is very well written and touching
i know the feeling of forbidden love

Sat, October 16th, 2010 1:55pm


yeah.we have one thing in common- the sickening feeling of forbidden love. thanks for the comment!

Sat, October 16th, 2010 1:56pm


This is, terrific. You must understand that I'm trying to tell you that I enjoy the poem and am not just saying that. Descriptions, feelings, images, and critical thinking all tied of nicely into lines of poetry that send me shivers during the beautiful end... I have no words for this. Maybe it's just because I can relate to this so much, but it's beauty tied with pain; pain tied with hope and love.

Absolutely deserves a 'like'.

Sat, July 16th, 2011 1:01am


OMG. this is one inspiring comment. thank you so much..!

Fri, July 15th, 2011 11:40pm


oh wow that was so amazing! You captured the emotions so well. I think a lot of people can relate to this

Tue, September 6th, 2011 9:09am


haha. maybe.. thank you so much! :))

Tue, September 6th, 2011 2:21am

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