Commanding Insight

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
Reality is unfair sometimes, So you need to create your own world and be a god in it but only on your mind.

My first poem!

Submitted: May 10, 2012

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Submitted: May 10, 2012

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Vivid colors streaming down from the clouds.
Floating austerity, just look beyond infinity.
To infiltrate emotions, let your creations take you away.
Is it a valley?, a mystical place? or just a memory?
Let Your eyes see what they can’t see …
Cause Your eyes can be your mouth, Listen to the sound they utter.
The sound of conspiracy.
Fight defiance! Seize your conscious mind.
Escape the word “reality”, conjure a fable.
Drift away, converge with your fantasy.
Be a creator. .
Be a creator . .
A god of your own world.


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