Describing The Girl With Blue Eyes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

No matter what we do in life, we will all experience this. We all will face one day when we have to describe her, but the fact is you can't because she makes you speechless every day.

Describing the perfect girl is not possible, you know why; because there are no words to describe her. Just imagine this you walk into a class, you never met her before you don’t even know who she is; but just from the first glance, her beautiful blue eyes sparkle like the stars in the sky in the middle of the night. Lame guys love to use the quote “I was looking for the stars all night last night, but it turns out they are in your eyes!” it is stupid! Most of the guys don’t even mean it. But just from the first glance, you are left speechless there on the spot. There aren’t even enough words to describe her beautiful blue eyes, so you just think, “how can I change, to become a better person to one day meet her?”

After a moment you finally get back to reality, just to go back into daydreaming because of her smile. Her smile shines bright like thousand sun rays but as beautiful as a diamond's reflection of the sun. Her beautiful red lips, glistening redder, than a fresh new apple just picked from a tree. When she speaks, her voice may sound quiet and normal, but when the words finally reach you, her voice is sweeter than a choir full of angels, but at the same time they carry weight with them.

From afar, she doesn’t seem shy, but why would she? The more you get to talk to her; you realize that she isn’t that shy. Her personality, perfect like everything else about her, you never knew someone could have so many great qualities in them. At first, you develop a crush on them, but that feeling usually goes away after a few days. Then you realize it’s not a temporary feeling, but instead a feeling you began to develop over time.

Putting all of the emotions aside, you then take one day, while work, thinking, or doing anything really and you begin to question yourself. You begin to question everything you have ever done, and you try to change for her, not because she wants you to change, not because you have to, but because you know you want to be accepted by her friends, by her but most of all you want to become a better person in general. You turn your bad habits into new better ones. Change is not a bad thing, but you can’t change for the girl, instead you have to change for yourself.

What a lot of girls won’t know is, if the guy really likes her, or has feelings for her, he will try to do what she is into even if it means waking up at 6 am to be with her at 7:30 am. If the night before she tells him that something is bothering her, some guys will stay up for hours and hours thinking of ways to make her smile the next day, to make her day feel as special as possible the next day without her knowing anything.

Most of all, no matter how much you try to describe her you won’t be able to because it would take one million years to finally achieve the goal. Beauty has no words. You will tell her over and over again she is beautiful, smart, gorgeous, and sweet, even if she doesn’t believe you. You will do that without even thinking because the only thing on your mind will be one question. “How can I make her day better?”

Submitted: October 01, 2014

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I love this short story. It is such a great do text, full of meaning, truth, and mysteries. This is definitely a text I would recommend.

Sun, July 14th, 2019 4:57am

Aia Bunny

Such a sweet writing!

Fri, December 13th, 2019 4:15pm


How gorgeous and sweet, what beautiful words I loved seeing how this girl was described.

Tue, March 17th, 2020 3:16am


me likeee

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