Poem by: patspoems
morning, crystal, dew
Submitted: October 28, 2011
Bright morning awakes
Clear crystal dew covers earth
Nature greets the day
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I do not even know what a HAIKU poem is but it is short :-)
I didn't used to like them Brian but have now been trying to learn the rules and quite enjoy them. They stem from Japan and to write them correctly there are lots of complex rules. They have to be 3 lines of only 17 syllables 5-7-5 and be about nature, touch, smell, sound etc If you just Google Haiku you will see. I am still very amateur but do enjoy trying.......
Short but very sweet Pat,i did a poem entitled EARLY MORNING and like yours it really does come alive on screen.
I have been attempting haiku Eileen, this was one of them. Thanks for reading I appreciate your encouragement.... Pat
It's amazing how you can say a mouth full, or write a book full, in only three lines. Very nice, and the pictures above each one helps to convey the message as well.
Thank you for your very encouraging comment.... Pat
So, THIS is Haiku; I thought my computer somehow missed the rest; great, short, poem!
ha ha glad you liked it... Pat
Yes Mike they are short but very sweet. Glad you liked it... Pat
i think Haiku poems are what we need the most these days Aunt, they are short and deep and provide the little windows of escape we are in so much need of in our silly, hectic lifestyles.. i love it Aunt Pat :-)
How lovely to see you here Elizabeth. I don't come on here much these days so what a surprise. So glad you liked it.... Love Aunt Pat
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