Poem by: patspoems
night, beauty, moon, stars
Submitted: October 28, 2011
Silver moon shines
Twinkling stars glitter
Night makes its entrance
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A very short poem that tells the natural beauty of a night! People believe that the night depicts evil but you have proved them wrong. I am going to click 'like' on this poem.
Thank you so much - so glad you liked it .... Pat
Beautiful poem nicely worded and it did the trick for me oh now on to your trick or treat poem no pun intended.
ha ha thank you Eileen glad you liked it.... Pat
You are far smarter them I as I could never get a poem in 10 words BUT see the little boat in the photo...that was me on Saturday night far from the city lights so the stars were shining brightly..plus I caught some fish :-) Keep writing my friend.....Brian
I am sure you could Brian. I thought I recognised you in that boat ha ha. Glad you had a lovely enjoyable evening. Take care.... Pat
Out in the dark of the country side, with no city lights blanketing and covering them up, one can see God's ongoing and continuous painting of his star filled sea. Once again, a beautiful poem.
Thank you for such a lovely comment..... Pat
Beautiful in only 10 words.
Thank you Angellynn. The 10 words was an idea someone came up with on Poetfreak, this was my attempt. Glad you liked it.... Pat
This poem, wow! It says it all! Is that ten?
haiku style Mike - 5 - 7 -5 line syllables. Glad you liked it.. Pat
Hi Pat * Beautifully put, and illustrated effectively with your choice of photo. Cheers * Keep Smilin'... Jax
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