WHEN THE REST OF THE WORLD WALKS OUT (PATSPOEMS)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

For a special friend

 


When the rest of the World walks out

I'll walk in

I'll be there through your very darkest night

I'll wipe away the tears

Banish all your fears

When the rest of the World walks out

I'll walk in.

When you feel that all your dreams have gone

There doesn't seem a reason to go on

Remember I am there

To listen and to care

When the rest of the World walks out

I''ll walk in


Submitted: April 10, 2011

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Brian W

It is good to have someone who cares that will be there for you when you need them...Pat your are one of those special people that honetly care for others...
A nice poem ....

Sun, April 10th, 2011 5:36pm

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Thanks for your lovely comment and may I add you are that kind of person too.

Sun, April 10th, 2011 4:11pm

Dannika Summers

Great job, I love it :)

Wed, April 13th, 2011 9:09pm

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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment... Pat

Wed, April 13th, 2011 3:28pm

bookwormellen

I have a best friend that I have known since I was a couple of months old. She is the twin sister I never had, and I know if the world walked out on me, she would walk in.
-Ellen

Sat, April 30th, 2011 3:01am

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A best friend is someone very special. I met my friend when we were 10 years old and are still best friends now 59 years later!! We can tell each other anything and everything and we have been there for each other through the good times and the bad. I am glad you have a friend you feel the same way about Elli. Thank you for reading my poems and your great comments..... Pat

Mon, May 2nd, 2011 4:01am

maraboo

The calm certainty reflected in this poem shows that you have been there for someone who really needed you, felt their pain and gave them what they needed to carry on. I think it is the best gift one person can give to another. It really touched me.

Wed, May 4th, 2011 3:35am

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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. You were right in your assumption and I must say that we all need that someone to be there at sometime in our life...... Pat

Wed, May 4th, 2011 12:40am

Mike Stevens

Pat, you won't believe this, but in my limited mind I'd already seen all your postings. I guess I should be used to missing 1/2 of the things that go on around me by now! Please forgive me! Excellent friendship poem, be it worldly or otherwise!

Sat, June 25th, 2011 10:50pm

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You have given my writing so much time that I am truly grateful and so glad that some of my poems from a while ago have been read again. Can't thank you enough Mike .... Pat

Thu, June 30th, 2011 10:47pm

KillerInStink

Everyone needs a friend like you. I am a twin so I always have one that doesn't need to walk in cause he is already there. lol. how lucky am I.
Nice feeling poem.
another winner.

Sun, June 26th, 2011 6:21am

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Thank you so much and yes you are very lucky. As a child I always dreamt of how lovely it would have been to have a twin - even gave her a name 'Pamela' ha ha. I would imagine it's a closeness compared to no other. Take care ..... Pat

Thu, June 30th, 2011 9:47pm

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