All But Just a Stargazer.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Gah! I get inspiration from everything -.- This honestly was a random write It wasn't suppose to exist but then I heard a line...and there you go. I typed it from my note section in my phone X) so I thought, hey? Maybe Booksie might like it.

 

Just watch it fall…

Since that’s what we do.

We watch the stars fall

And whisper a wish.

A wish to the now dark sky

A whisper to a shadowed night.

It’s lifeless.

It has no light—since

 

We watched it fall

And all we did

Was wished.


Submitted: February 16, 2012

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everlastinglove

its good, it creates a nice atmospheric feeling...

Thu, February 16th, 2012 11:07am

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It does? Darn, it was suppose to be a feeling bad kind of thing...but oh well. Thanks :)

Fri, February 17th, 2012 11:11am

NMIO

I loved the way it flowed. Nice word choice.

Thu, February 16th, 2012 5:40pm

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thank you :)

Fri, February 17th, 2012 11:12am

5Forever23His10Fan

I really do like the rythem of this poem... excellent job :)

Fri, February 17th, 2012 6:01pm

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oh thanks :D

Fri, February 17th, 2012 11:12am

arun

And so did our wishes that vanished!
Didn't that make a good ending? At least such will sum up the poem and give it a new paint--not to wish uselessly seeing stars but just set to work!
Keep writing, lovely.
Take care :)

Fri, February 17th, 2012 9:31pm

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Darn, should've put that in!! lol but yes! That's exactly what it means! I was scared no one would've got it :)

Fri, February 17th, 2012 8:36pm

John Wanderlei

love it. the darkeness of this poem reallly good. keep it up!:)

Tue, February 21st, 2012 12:50am

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Yes someone found it dark like I intended it to be. But thanks anyhow :)

Tue, February 21st, 2012 6:45pm

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