As I walk through the doors of the amusement park. I can hear the high pitch scream, some of joy, pleasure and energy, others of fear, terror and panic. I see people laughing with delight and glee a few are even crying from too much laughter. I can smell the sweet aroma of sugary, rich, mouth watering doughnuts. I can feel the sticky and syrupy carmel melting off in the suns warmth falling from my carmel apple and sinking into my hand. I can taste the fluffy, delectable, delicious cotton candy slowly melting in my mouth as I drive back home from the fascinating amusement park. :)
Submitted: June 04, 2010
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astounding,awesome,appreciable work.kmu one like frm me
Mon, June 27th, 2011 8:43am
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aha nice alliteration and thanks and i will ! ;]
Mon, July 25th, 2011 6:04pm
I Love it it is so well written
Sun, July 17th, 2011 1:57pm
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thanks
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I LOVE AMUSEMENT PARKS!
Fri, June 24th, 2011 4:47pmThis inspired me to go to one :D
Great poem sweets! xoxo
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LOL nice and thanks (:
Mon, July 25th, 2011 6:03pm