Your Eyes Aglow.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
A man who cannot reach the view of his lovers eyes suffers daily until he can.

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Submitted: July 18, 2008

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(Version 1)

Oh my dearest Lover,
How you taunt me.
Your eyes, aglow, but hidden from all.
Away, you hide from me in your slumber,
And force me to await the dawn again.

Too far are you from me,
In these days of youthful bliss and love.
Fifty miles, each a pitfall, I am kept from you.
In each would I gladly die,
just to reach your view again.

Your voice, even, would sooth my soul,
Oh, but your eyes, that blissful stare,
Your piercing glow, a gaze of beauty.
I long, daily to make that trek.
Tarry I on, in sorrow, just to see you again.



(Version 2)

My dearest Lover,
How you taunt me.
Your eyes! Aglow, but hidden from all.
Away, you hide from me in your slumber,
And force me to await the dawn again.

Too far! You are from me,
In these days of youthful bliss and love.
Fifty miles, each a pitfall, I am kept from you.
In each would I gladly die,
Just to reach your view again.

Just your voice, would sooth my soul,
Oh! But your eyes, that blissful stare,
Your piercing glow, Gaze of beauty.
I long, daily to make that trek.
Tarry I on, in sorrow, just to see you again.


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