The haunted house

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


Mirror, mirror on the wall you can never scape the haunted hall

Step by step you fall on the ground full of hole

Knock; knock on the door you have to be cool

Cause the room will be very cold.


One by one riddles will pop

You have to answer if you want to stop

Run to your the left, run to your the right

Listen carefully before you make a jump.


Haunted house are full fun

Put your rubber shoes before you run

Cover your ears before the fun goes on

Cause the haunted house is full of moans.


The clock will strike 12

The midnight will start to round

Obey the rules inside the house

Cause this night will never finds its end

And morning sunlight will never shine again once you start the ride inside.


Composed by: Jennifer S. Padio (On the spot)

Title: The Haunted House (Unedited)


Submitted: December 09, 2015

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Phantom Crisis

the composition was made on the spot, so you will find some errors on it. you're free to post your opinion and comments below, and what can you say about the story. thank you and God blessings..

Wed, December 9th, 2015 4:18pm

Julyn Pride

I love seeing the initial creation of a poem or story. Nothing like a first draft to understand how the mind works. Thanks for sharing. Hope to see more.

Sat, December 19th, 2015 11:17pm


Wow this is really good, go you:)!! I think you would like my story "That's How It Goes" it's only got the first chapter and it's a true story:)!!

Tue, January 26th, 2016 12:06pm


thanks... I'll stop by and read yours too.

Thu, January 28th, 2016 6:15am

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