The Wind Relies on Kisses

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a free verse about well, you decide...

Put down your pen, listen to the wind.
It blows right by and lays a kiss on your face.
The lips feel calm, warming, the same.
It comes and goes, as the wind does.
Rest assured though, it will be back.
Lying, waiting, breathing, seeing.
Breath into the wind and add your own kiss.
So that others can feel the warm of its lips.
Thank those who add to the wind.
Cure those who take and do not give back.
The wind is made of a thousand kisses.
Look for one to match your lips.
Calm, Warming, the same.


Submitted: January 10, 2009

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CursedHeart

OMG PHIL!! this is beautiful. It left me so speechless.
"Breath into the wind and add your own kiss.
So that others can feel the warm of its lips.
Thank those who add to the wind.
Cure those who take and do not give back."

MY FAVORITE PART!! lol
I can't even really give you a detailed critique because it's so amazing.
Your Devoted Fan (and best friend..duh!!..lol jk)
CursedHeart

Sun, January 11th, 2009 1:29am

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Thanks! This one is one of my favorites. i am putting up another you have already read some time soon...

Sat, January 10th, 2009 9:15pm

Dejected But Symmetrical

That was an amazing read, So far I love everything I have read of yours.... :)

Sun, January 11th, 2009 10:16am

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Hey, Thanks. I look forward to reading some of your stuff :D

Sun, January 11th, 2009 6:51am

Cara Greenwood

This is really clever and sweet. I like it. Nice poem, too. I'm intrigued by this, and I'm going to go check some of your other stuff out ;)

Wed, February 5th, 2014 9:52pm

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