Dream Spell

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Again another from my bedroom.

Dream Spell
As the stars above,
Cast their spell,
People near and far,
Look up at the stars.
‘Tis so beautiful
There’s nothing like it,
If a star must fall,
Let it fall toward your hands.
But as the stars above,
Fade away,
The sun is rising,
As we wait for the day to end.

Submitted: October 20, 2009

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A very lovely write. I enjoyed it very much.

Wed, October 21st, 2009 1:33pm


thank you!!!

Wed, October 21st, 2009 8:43am


This is beautiful.
I really love your poetry.
Keep me updated on anything new okay?

Mon, February 22nd, 2010 10:30pm


sure i have like 20 that i need to get on here ( i write 2 poems every night(a lot of free time) thanks for the comment I've been told my poems are 2 simple (so thanks everybody!!)

Fri, February 26th, 2010 9:23pm


Wow i have this say i love this, i am quite a poetry fan and this drew me... it speaks to me because thats how i feel about the stars, they can put me at such ease. I love it and your creativity

Tue, February 23rd, 2010 2:47am


thanks the one thing i like 2 watch is the stars!!! thanks!

Fri, February 26th, 2010 9:56am


Love it! I cant wait to read the other ones that u make! I have 2 more and then I have read and commented on every single one!

Wed, May 5th, 2010 6:21pm


yep thanks

Thu, May 6th, 2010 11:14am

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