Droplets of Miseries

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Try and decipher this if you want, but don't ask me what it means.


Innocence of grey,

Like droplets falling away,

 


Dwindling on the sidelines,

Member of the audience as existance pines,

 


Like mown grass,

The muse has left in its mass,

 


Miseries as plague,

Future happiness looks vague,

 


Do rubik's cubes go on forever?

Or does the life leave whichever?

 


Submitted: April 05, 2012

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Insane Membrane

I love your title ... and your name ...and no they don't they loose their stickers or drive you mad and so you throw them against the wall and smash em

Thu, April 5th, 2012 8:26pm

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Thanks for the info :) Remind me never to buy a Rubik's Cube.

Thu, April 5th, 2012 1:57pm

dazzle

I really like it! For each person it will create a different image, depending on how they interpret it. A lot of depth to it as well, and full of emotion, nice job!:)

Thu, April 5th, 2012 10:03pm

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Thanks:)

Thu, April 5th, 2012 3:09pm

Violet dusk justice finn darrot

As usual, excellent. A tad random, but meaningful in its way. BAZINGA

Thu, June 7th, 2012 10:59am

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It makes sense to me. Which is pretty self-explanatory, actually. I suppose the whole thing is like a scripted Big-Lipped Alligator Moment. Which reminds me, I have a tonne more NC and co videos on my phone. Including Kickassia.

Thu, June 7th, 2012 5:18am

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