i miss you (remake (tell me what you think)) i miss you (remake (tell me what you think))

i miss you (remake (tell me what you think))

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Submitted: June 06, 2010

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I miss you
The long days when I’m alone and I can’t see you
Everyone around me is quite and so are you
You don’t speak
I ask myself
Why do I miss you so much even when your
Right next to me
Is it a crime to like you so much that my heart skips beats?
I’m so sad because you feel so far away
I want to talk to you
See you
Touch you and hold you
But I can’t even if you’re right there
I’m in so much pain my heart is
Black and breaking in little tiny pieces
Because I miss you
The only place I can see you
Where I’m not blind or touch less
Is in my dream it reminds me of the first time we meet
You where so beautiful
Your smile was like a trap
The way you told me you loved me and said you
Would never leave me
What happened too you would never leave me?
Where did you go?
Where are you
I can’t find you
When are you coming back?  
I need you to put my heart together again
I also need you to dry my tears
I love you so much
Please
Come back
I miss you


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