Poem by: Please
Genre: Song Lyrics
Submitted: January 20, 2012
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A Lovely song please, The words are very poetic and full of meaning. I would hope that any music that is paired with the words is such that it compliments so the words are heard.
I really liked the musing of those who know what quite can bring.............
incase you are wondering why your not getting many reads it's seems that Booksie is broken and no one is getting pubished works notifications of friends/fans in their emails, so we are having to hunt for any new posts, for now anything new, post in my wall.
okay thank you! i was wondering cause i was going to start reading all of the new emails i got but i havent gotton any! it was mkaing me upset! thank you for telling me it wasnt only me who wasnt getting any! okay dibs, thanking you for coming and looking and for reading and i hope the music i get will compliment it.... i ll have to see... yhave a great day, dibs, big hugs!
I LOVE THIS I SANG IT! NEAR THE END WHERE IT SAID SHOULD WE DO MORE NOISE I SANG LOUDLY BUT MOST I SANG SOFTLY/QUETLY! UR LYRICS R BEUTIFUL AND I LOVE UR WIDE VOCABULARY :D
Oh! Thank you! im so glad it came out singable! Thank you for looking at it and thank you so much for the sweet comment! You have made my day :)
I can picture this song playing to soft kingdom melodies. I like how you can see all the different sides to something a lot of people can find negative. Its really beautiful!
Thank you, i do try to see the different sides, thank you for noticing :)
nothing tacky here, nothing at all. Those words will speak to anyone and everyone. Quiet can be a friend or can frighten. Think it has to do with just what you've written: seeing both sides and knowing it's all about you and your own self.
Keep writing, please. I am so glad you're back. And that I remember to check - Dibs is right. Maybe there're too many of us for Booksie to keep up with! Don't worry. You have readers, and we enjoy you.
Best and kindest regards, Wilbur
Thank you :) thank you for taking the time to find this and for your very sweet comment... i also think you are right about what dibs is right about.... anyways thank you alot :)
your quiet speaks volumes....this is just lovely....love to hear it sung
Oh moonphish! i was really hoping you would stumble across my page and see my songs... im so glad you did! you being in a band and such i was hoping my words would get a good report... so thank you! and if you want to hear it sung you should sing it! i bet you would do a lovely job with it :) i have a terribly off-tune voice, i know everyone has gifts and singing is not one of mine :) Thank you though!
I can't seem to put music to this, but I like the poem and the strength of character it represents.
Thank you... i wrote it pretty quickly so maybe that is why it comes out strange... thank you for reading and commenitn!
Quiet would mean I didn't read this, but noise means I did, and thought it was fantastic!
Oh well... thank you very much! Thank you for reading!
i like this one the best of the three (although i think you spelled silence wrong) you can't sing!? too bad. you write songs but you can't sing. bummer. that's what i think i'll be doing next with the audio thing. i like the interesting structure of it, long and short lines, how you touched on such a thought provoking subject. silence can be so soothing and so terrifying, depending on what we bring to it. well done!
lol i cannot wait to hear you sing some songs! Thank you for the compliments and pointing out the silence thing... you are right of course and i think this song has the most universal appeal and came out as an actual song that could be sung by someone... Thank you again for looking and reading :)
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