Today I Made an Old Lady Cry

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Today I Made an Old Lady Cry

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Today I Made an Old Lady Cry

Poem by: Please

Genre: Poetry

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Poem by: Please

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Genre: Poetry

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Well, ok i admit it i'm a copycat. I saw the contest between Foxglove, Dibs, bobthebuilder and others for a 10 line rhyme, i know the contest is over but I wanted to try to write one anyways so hear it is.... Please comment Thanks

Summary

Well, ok i admit it i'm a copycat. I saw the contest between Foxglove, Dibs, bobthebuilder and others for a 10 line rhyme, i know the contest is over but I wanted to try to write one anyways so hear it is.... Please comment Thanks

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Submitted: December 05, 2011

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Submitted: December 05, 2011

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Today I made an old lady cry

Please allow me to tell you why

Before, I heard in her voice a sigh

And though I didn't want to pry

I saw a loneliness in her eye

Usually, away I'd shy

But I felt like I had to try

So when my group spoke to the upstairs Guy

Her hand, took I

And by-and-by

We stood there and I will not lie

We shared something that cannot die

Through this story I hope to imply

If you get a chance make an old lady cry.


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