response to Love Letter

I write with trepidation,
Remembering the words
Sealed waxen with passion,
The pen trembles in my palm,
Again I feel faint with desire,
My declarations are wanton,
Although I dare not reveal
Such blatant thoughts!
My breath is deep
Likened to your words,
Although I hold no education,
Of passion and love I have
Much knowledge.
This verse is my open heart
Each letter a declaration
Of love’s intentions
Sent on a wish of
Perfumed aspirations
Sealed diligently
With a pious vow
Your muse to
Write me as you will..

Submitted: September 02, 2010

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wow. this is the most excellently worded poem i've in a loong time. it's fabulous!!

Thu, September 2nd, 2010 5:15am


Awesome as always. I loved the line " Although I hold no education Of passion and love I have much knowledge. " It's just like so matter of fact. Keep up the great work Plelitte!

Thu, September 2nd, 2010 12:14pm

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