My tainted wings
Black as night,
Dulled by heavens
Holy light,
Burning flame
Patient fire,
Dwindling dusk
Blazing dawn,
Booming voice
Soft sweet tune,
All beating in my heart to make
My tainted wings as
Black as night,
Dulled by heavens
Holy light.
Submitted: August 13, 2007
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Comments
I like the poem style. A lot.
The contrast between each line is awesome too.
Like where you said "dwindling dusk" "breaking dawn".
Sheer melody! 5/5!
Wow! Your poem had a great rhythm, I was nodding my head to it! The imagery is great, and it ran really smoothly. I loved it!
Thu, November 1st, 2007 5:08amFIFTH, FIFTH! THIS IS AN OUTRAGE SOMEONE DESERVES TO BE SHOT!
Sun, November 4th, 2007 12:38pmOUTRAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sun, November 4th, 2007 12:39pmyes i like ti, it means i think this should have one and its an outrage that it didn't also the judge needs to be shot :)
Mon, November 5th, 2007 8:47amStrong voice and Strong words... a beautiful read!
Thu, February 14th, 2008 6:14amapril this has always been one of my favorite poems of yours and yes the judge should be shot
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Great image at the end. I could see a dark angel being illuminated. Thanks for the image. It was cool as hell. Very symbolic.
Mon, August 13th, 2007 2:25amAuthor
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Thanx!!
Sun, August 12th, 2007 8:14pmI think that was why it got Fifth out of like 37....
GLAD someone liked it!!
^_^! *Peace!*