I wrote this for someone I found that changed my world.

I feel so much happyness when you are around makeing everything brighter when you laugh and smile, An emotions comeback that I havent felt in a while. I love the way you stop me when I start acting out of line, its little things like that letting me know your realy mine. Every time you walk into my sight everything else will freeze but you, Then my heart beats so fast that my body doesnt even know what to do. It gets hard to breath and my chest becomes real tight, because you are my one true angel that brings in my darkness the light.

Submitted: May 05, 2007

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Very nice write to your special friend. You Have a nice tecnnique and your rhyme is very good. One thing though( Happyness ) should be happiness.I dont mean to be hypercriticle. It's a very nice piece and that kinda takes away from it a little..Keep on penning, yhhou have the gift...Lovin Charmer

Sat, May 5th, 2007 11:29am


thanks for the spelling check glad you liked it

Thu, May 10th, 2007 3:49am

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