True Love 'Til The End!

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I was sitting in class one day and realized that life is short and there's no time like the present. Enjoy!

At age nine she be asked "How much do you love me?"

She replied with out stretched arms saying, "This much!"

 

At age twenty-three she be asked, "How much do you love me?"

She smiled from beneath tears and replied, "I do!"

 

At age fifty-nine she be asked, "How much do you love me?"

She smiled weak yet bright replying with her final breath,

"Enough to say this isn't the end, my love!"


Submitted: January 16, 2013

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FrozenDreamer

Awww, so sweet! Loved it!

Wed, January 16th, 2013 6:54pm

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Thank You!

Fri, January 18th, 2013 8:55am

Spyguy

I love the sentiment, sad that her life ended so young. Was this your wife?

Wed, January 16th, 2013 7:41pm

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No, it was the point of view from a friend. Plus, I am a woman! But thank you.

Fri, January 18th, 2013 8:53am

RockerWolf

Sweet!

Thu, January 17th, 2013 1:25am

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Thanks!

Fri, January 18th, 2013 8:50am

venlockheart

very nice.. :)

Thu, January 17th, 2013 1:17pm

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Thank You!

Fri, January 18th, 2013 8:50am

Cheryl Lousie Nelson

I like the way it shows the passing of time and the maturity growing in the answers, from babe in arms to young spirit to adulthood. Very nice.

Tue, January 22nd, 2013 9:12pm

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Wed, January 23rd, 2013 7:50am

Matthew D. Hay (Tangible Word)

Awwe this was so cute (:

Thu, January 24th, 2013 6:44pm

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Thank You!

Tue, January 29th, 2013 7:57am

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