Poem by: Poetlife
Submitted: February 06, 2013
I can not live your dreams,
I have dreams of my own.
Let me live mine,
Together may we learn this truth,
May our dreams come true.
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Wait who wins when dreams collide?? ;.(
i don't understand your comment, would you like to tell me/explain further what you mean.
Wow I loved this :D Especially your last rhyme with truth and truth, if indeed it was to rhyme (: ALtogether a thoughtful, powerful poem, well written :D
Thanks Tangible Word,
Gald you liked it- It comes from my soul journey through life-we are all each others teachers- good-or bad.
(I have read your profile- believe me some people put others off life, God, by their behavious/demands.
I am a beliver that God is the life breath in all life, where do you think we get all our talents from?
It is a gift we should use to help others - lift him up,introduce him to others.Give Him thanks.I have changed, I was told God changes people. He doe's.
Till next time.Take care.
Thanks Tangible Word-
Glad you like it.(I am a published poet with some of my work. in hard cover.)
When you live your life according to other people’s expectations you can end up feeling unhappy. I really liked this poem.
Thamks Criss Sole-
we should never live our life according to others people's expectations-as they ruin lives and are not always right.I know-sadly.
I meant for example say we are both dreaming for the same job or the same guy... Someone maybe both of us lose. That's all.
Thanks for your reply-
Be careful how you respond to others work-
We don't all have the same dreams-
& some are personel.
Great subject, my favorite part is together may we learn this truth. That line made the poem in my opinion, great work
Some expect others to live their dreams-(like some others use their disability to try & control others.It's not just school children,& teens that get bullyed,at school, life, internet. Sadly it's adults too.)
This is why I wrote it.
Your comments noted.
Everybody has different dreams , different way of living.
Hope people understand and respect each other's dream
I agree- so do I? Hope you may have also liked it?
It was a great poem. One of the moments where two lovers will find out that they have two different dreams and that they are following two different paths in their life. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for dropping by reading/commenting-glad you enjoyed it?It's not written just for lovers -but for all of us.
Very true and very straight! I like it! :)
Thanks I shared it because some one expected me to live their dreams.Glad you can relate.& like it.
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