The moment i first saw you!!

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Rough times when the girl you love leaves you.....this was my frst poem i ever wrote i hope you enjoy please give me feedback.

Submitted: December 01, 2011

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Submitted: December 01, 2011




From the moment I saw you I knew…..

You see I thought I knew but I was mistaken

Never could I have thought that you would turn out to be so evil

You know my mom told me about girls like you and dammit why didn’t I listen to bobby bushays momma when  she said those famous words  “girls are the devil”.


I guess ive been wrong a lot in my life

I recall you saying “i will love you forever”

Forever already ended. And I no longer feel the love.

 “your the only one for me”.

Well its been a week since you left and already you’ve found another me?

“Ill never leave you “.

You left .


I didn’t write this poem for you .

So before you go thinking  so.

Ill be glad to let you know .

I am free. Happy. And ive forever forgotten the moment I first saw you .


Joshua dowler

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