Thomas Blade

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is a little bit of a book i wrote and i am 11 so i need some advice on my stories.

Submitted: May 21, 2011

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Thomas Blade
 
Chapter 1:Tom
The heavy rain poured down on a young black-haired youth. His normally well styled hair lay plastered to his head while his sharp green eyes surveyed the area. This would seem relatively auspicious in downtown London, apart from the fact he was crouched on top of a ten storey building. Tom Blade tensed as his target walked out of a building onto the pavement, oblivious of his fate. The boy looked down and started to calculate some distances. Then, he jumped. The house was lower than the building and hurt a lot when he landed in a roll. It would hurt more lately. But right now he had only one goal. To murder the murderer. Sprinting as lithely as a cat he navigated the suburban housing until his victim was in sight. Carl Panning was a retired drug dealer turned accountant, after serving The Triad, this one had ratted on his family. Tom drew out a long menacing blade, with serrated edges and although the blade was clean and silver the rough, leather handle was covered in dried blood. Now it was time, Thomas Blade drew in a long breath and jumped, landing perfectly, he smirked with devilish glee “Nighty night,” and sent the knife through his jugular. The man spluttered with warm blood trickling down his throat. “Why....me.” The Carl gasped and Tom said “Nothing personal,” he paused “Oh yeah, it’s the complete opposite.” Then, he twisted the blade. Thomas Blade had been an orphan for five years; his family had been murdered when he was twelve for committing a crime that they didn’t commit. Tom had been searching for the killers ever since. He still remembered the night......
“Ready or not here I come!” Clara yelled as she ran around the house, searching for her siblings. Jack was hiding under the bed as usual, while Zoe had crouched in her cupboard. But Tom was in the dumb waiter, which was the only place they never looked. This was where he was when the screams of terror were ringed around the house, with ear splitting volume. That was when he came out of the dumb waiter and saw the dead body of Clara laying on the floor, with wine red blood trickling from her chest. Afterwards, shaking like a leaf, Tom walked down to the kitchen and saw his mum and dad lying on the floor stone dead, slowly filling up the floor with crimson, red blood. Then he screamed.....


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