Short Story by: prateeksha
Genre: Literary Fiction
love, death, marriage, school, god, religious, alone, teacher, kids, torture, age, remorse, church, kind, killed, torment, india, flowers, hair, widow, ill, cross, lady, relatives, treatment, jasmine, clothing, bald
Submitted: April 25, 2010
© Copyright 2016 prateeksha. All rights reserved.
Graphically impressed ... I feel one-upped =)
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"Please click on the book image to open the book".
Thank you. Did you like the story?
It was a beautifullllllllllll graphical presentation, how did you managed it? Story was emotional, and has it's chords at right places..loved it.
Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. Wanted to try something different
your stories amazing! and im also graphically impressed!
Thank you. I am glad you liked it
like the way you did it. creative.
Something is wrong? I don't know what it is but the right side pages are not completely displayed. Like on pg. 7, 2nd line, "She had been ... profess
3rd line, " certain ... never
Anyways! The magic spells of your graphics and decorations have already pointed out how devoted you are towards your work, proves that your are blessed by Goddess of creativity.
The pages take a bit to load. They are being displayed completely. Thanks for taking time out to review my work
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I like this a lot. Totally awesome :].
thank you. glad you liked it
i seem to have problems viewing the pages.. like half of the right page is not showing!
but looks really impressive..
i'll be back later to check it again :)
like i said, these pages take some time to load on slow connections. Anyways I am glad you took out the time to review this work
I thought that you did an amazing job on both the story & the presentation. Absolutely fantastic!!
Very touching. I liked your use of language, graphic details, and also the storyline....it's mind blowing. Keep it up, buddy :)
Thank you a lot!
SUBODH RAMESH AHIRE
and offcource magnificently written, yeah till time i didn finish it, but whatever I read i feel its perfect in its own turm.
more creative than ordinarry, which make it more effective than others
oh, i was blinking my eyes. How did you create this graphics. can you tell me. The short story was nice and beautiful to read. I love its presentation.
I am glad you liked it. You can create it by bookrix
Brilliant story. It reminds us the way women are still treated in some countries, doesn't it?
I also liked the fact that while there is a wise, serene feeling throughout, it's constantly overshadowed by guilt. It's like suffering from depression for such a long time that you're under the impression it's a natural part of you.
And then, in a moment's time, she's reborn like a phoenix from the ashes.
I apologise for the rant, and I can't wait for more!
I am yruly happy that u liked it so much. And it certainly wasnt a rant for me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was not there in booksie quite long. I was not creating these days anything. Sorry for not reading your comments and messages. Hope i will be writing again. My mind is muddled.
This is really a beautiful short story. brilliantly written. i love how you presented.
thank you! hav not been in touch wid booksie myself
I love to read out such blogs.I would like to say you thanks for sharing such a nice blog.Well work dude keep it up.
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