For people to tell the truth to others, first they must be honest to themselves.

Life is a journey that everyone must face,

It will always be true when you stand in your place.

The positives overjoy and the negatives push down,

But if you tell the truth it will cease to show a frown.

You must live your life to what is inside,

Otherwise the world will be a dismal ride.

Love is always here, there and everywhere,

It will show itself when you are ready to share.

Remember all the things that stay in your heart,

Your loved ones, your cared things and you will never part.

Say goodbye to the fakes, they will forever do harm,

Live your life in truth, harmoney, love and you'll be a joyful little farm...

 

Thank you for reading, I have never wrote poetry before so this was a little experiment.

-Princess of her dreams


Submitted: November 23, 2013

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manluckys

Although u said it is ur first poem, it sound good to me keep it up.

Sat, November 23rd, 2013 2:51am

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Thanks, I was thinking when I wrote this OMG it sounds weird but whenever it's my own writing I can always find things wrong with it. Obviously I am being being paranoid because two people like it and have commented, now I love it completely when I read this... urg this is long :/

Sat, November 23rd, 2013 1:57am

krsupnm09

Loved the way it flows. Enjoyed reading it. Keep writing. Like from me.

Sat, November 23rd, 2013 5:26am

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Do you? That's really nice and thanks x2 for reading and commenting on both my pieces of work :D

Sat, November 23rd, 2013 1:58am

Stormbird Throneshaker

Believe your beliefs and doubt your doubts, but never doubt your beliefs.
This is a great first poem.

Mon, November 25th, 2013 2:46am

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Thank you, that's really nice :D

Sun, November 24th, 2013 7:23pm

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