Why did you hurt me?
Why won't you tell?
You say you can't, but i know you can.
I don't know why you did it
Heck, I don't even think you know.
The pain is still there
In my arms, legs, everywhere.
Do you have any remorse?
Can you even get that feeling?
You told me you're fast
Well, i'm fast too.
You made the mistake
of trusting me to much.
You lied to me a lot
saying you loved me a bunch.
You said "pain builds character"
My character was built
I got away
and now you're mad.
But you're in jail now
so that's to bad.
Of course, I wouldn't expect much
from a guy who acts like an animal.
Why did you chose me?
Do you know who I am?
How could you ruin my life?
You threatened me, you raped me, you abused me
It all hurts so much.
You scared me and my family
When you took me away.
I don't know why i'm writing this
maybe, to take the pain away?
I'm sick, I'm healthy
I'm tired, I'm awake.
So please, please
won't you give me a break?
Do you know how much it would take
for you to feel my pain?
I'm gonna stop wriing this now
it brings back to many memories.
Some good, some bad
unfortunately they all involve you.
I wish you were erased
From the earth, from my brain.
So now I say goodbye to you
atlast, atlast for your actions are so vain.
Submitted: April 12, 2009
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Comments
Ilike the way you wrote this, very emotional.
Mon, November 16th, 2009 4:15am Evokes a lot of very strong emotion.Like mattie,I also was convinced that this was inspired by a personal tragedy.My only complaint is the use of the word heck.It seems out of place in a piece this heavy.It sort of softens the blow in that line, while the rest of the piece is very impactful.
Fantastic job seeing through someone else's eyes; that is a difficult thing to do well.
Harsh. Well done. I "liked" it! Best of luck.
Wed, May 12th, 2010 1:01pmWell-done. It was were good and also it was very consistent in the way it was written.
Thu, May 27th, 2010 8:02amClear talent, wow.
Tue, July 13th, 2010 12:08pmvery powerful writing that tells the sorry story of this horrid crime.well done
Mon, September 27th, 2010 7:37amgreat poem!
btw you misspelled writing when you said; "im going to stop writing this now".
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Mattie
You have real talent, the way you wrote this makes the reader think it is real, you did a good job at making me believe what i was reading had really happened, just this poem makes me waht to read more of your stuff.
Sat, May 2nd, 2009 1:01amWell done on this. :)
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thanks!
Sun, May 3rd, 2009 4:34pm