You...Me...Pain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

being taken isn't easy..especially when you are dealing expert crminal.....17 year old Em tells us about it

Why did you hurt me?

Why won't you tell?

You say you can't, but i know you can.

I don't know why you did it

Heck, I don't even think you know.

The pain is still there

In my arms, legs, everywhere.

Do you have any remorse?

Can you even get that feeling?

You told me you're fast

Well, i'm fast too.

You made the mistake

of trusting me to much.

You lied to me a lot

saying you loved me a bunch.

You said "pain builds character"

My character was built

I got away

and now you're mad.

But you're in jail now

so that's to bad.

Of course, I wouldn't expect much

from a guy who acts like an animal.

Why did you chose me?

Do you know who I am?

How could you ruin my life?

You threatened me, you raped me, you abused me

It all hurts so much.

You scared me and my family

When you took me away.

I don't know why i'm writing this

maybe, to take the pain away?

I'm sick, I'm healthy

I'm tired, I'm awake.

So please, please

won't you give me a break?

Do you know how much it would take

for you to feel my pain?

I'm gonna stop wriing this now

it brings back to many memories.

Some good, some bad

unfortunately they all involve you.

I wish you were erased

From the earth, from my brain.

So now I say goodbye to you

atlast, atlast for your actions are so vain.


Submitted: April 12, 2009

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Mattie

You have real talent, the way you wrote this makes the reader think it is real, you did a good job at making me believe what i was reading had really happened, just this poem makes me waht to read more of your stuff.

Well done on this. :)

Sat, May 2nd, 2009 1:01am

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thanks!

Sun, May 3rd, 2009 4:34pm

Chrissy

Ilike the way you wrote this, very emotional.

Mon, November 16th, 2009 4:15am

ADaniels

Evokes a lot of very strong emotion.Like mattie,I also was convinced that this was inspired by a personal tragedy.My only complaint is the use of the word heck.It seems out of place in a piece this heavy.It sort of softens the blow in that line, while the rest of the piece is very impactful.
Fantastic job seeing through someone else's eyes; that is a difficult thing to do well.

Tue, May 11th, 2010 11:13pm

DKTD

Harsh. Well done. I "liked" it! Best of luck.

Wed, May 12th, 2010 1:01pm

Reneecrossovertome

Well-done. It was were good and also it was very consistent in the way it was written.

Thu, May 27th, 2010 8:02am

lady T

Clear talent, wow.

Tue, July 13th, 2010 12:08pm

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thanks :)

Wed, July 14th, 2010 2:19am

nighthawk

very powerful writing that tells the sorry story of this horrid crime.well done

Mon, September 27th, 2010 7:37am

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thanks

Mon, September 27th, 2010 11:59am

Used

great poem!
btw you misspelled writing when you said; "im going to stop writing this now".

Sun, January 9th, 2011 9:12pm

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thanks..oh and i will go fix that

Sun, January 9th, 2011 1:47pm

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