WhyLie

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I had like this guy,very nice guy... But he lied to me, his name and age.

Why lie?

I have try,

not to lie.

You have open me,

another side of me.

I have fly,

to a different sky,

so i never lied.

All the amazing texting,

you'r the one that lied,

between the sky.

I came back from the sky,

because there is to much lies.

So i will try not to go back to the sky.


Submitted: April 22, 2012

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Adam Williamson

You have a typo lol but I love it because its short and it makes alot of sense ****

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 6:21pm

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Well this poem was not 'OMA it needs to be perfect or just right' you know. Just something i had on my mind. I will appreciate the errors you point out. next time in my sleep i will not have a typo bla bla. so thanks for reading my poem Adam Williamson.

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 11:56pm

Megstar1563

This was awesome, I loved the flow

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 7:19am

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Thanks Megstar1563, I am not good with rhyming. But i am working on it.

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 3:11am

DarknessRecides

its great i suck with rhymeing so i just dont:P

Thu, May 24th, 2012 5:24pm

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Thanks,The thing is poems is not only for rhyming you know. Sometimes it is how you express your feelings. It releases the pain.

Mon, May 28th, 2012 12:50am

shaleheen

it makes lot of sense, I like it. Wish truth comes you shortly.

Fri, August 31st, 2012 10:56am

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Thanks shaleheen...

Thu, September 6th, 2012 3:07am

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