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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem about how I felt after a terrible break up. I'm not emo, but all these emotions that bundled up inside of me needed to come out. I would rather write it then express it.

Who is a girl at the beach feeling confused and unwanted.

Hearing kids laughing and bird's singing.

Watching the water as it changes to different shades of blue.

Awaiting a chance to laugh along, with not a care in the world.

 

Acting like nothings wrong in her life.

Feeling broken believing she means nothing to the world.

Realizing sand covering up her toes.

Wondering what it feels like to be loved by someone.

Remembering the memories she treasures dearly.

Lost in her own world, looking for a way out.

 

Understanding the pain and regret others might feel.

Telling people that she will be okay.

Dreaming in colors like red, blue, or green of her past.

Longing for someone, but not wanting the pain from before.

Who is scared.

 

Hoping to think about the pain in a good way.

Wanting it to come true.

Fearing this won't be her only heartbreak.

Only listening to others tell her what's wrong instead of what's right.


Submitted: March 15, 2012

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jmurch

What a beautiful piece. Don't listen to others tell you it is wrong if this is biographical.

Thu, March 15th, 2012 9:22pm

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Thank You! That really means a lot. I learned that I'm better then those certain people. It was hard seeing my ex making out with a girl on Valentines Day. I felt like my world shattered

Thu, March 15th, 2012 4:17pm

iola ried

It's great, sums up feelings after a break-up really well =)

Thu, March 15th, 2012 10:10pm

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Thank you. I wrote this poem awhile ago so I'm better now. People use to make fun of me for being so heart broken.

Thu, March 15th, 2012 3:20pm

Imagine Words

Love the way you balded the words out to show what your feeling in the poem, it also makes it very eye catching :D Great work

Thu, March 15th, 2012 10:19pm

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Thank you. It was for a school assignment and I just really liked it. Plus, my teacher told me I should let people read my poems... I'm very glad u like it

Thu, March 15th, 2012 3:51pm

Brian W

A good poem full of your emotions..You have to ask yourself next time "Is this person worth the chance of a heartbreak" I like how you set the poem out...Well written

Fri, March 16th, 2012 5:12am

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Thank you very much. At the time, I thought the guy was the perfect one or at least someone that would stick around for a long time and everything will be fine, but he doesn't care anymore. Looks are desiving!

Thu, March 15th, 2012 10:37pm

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