based off a picture.


Hits her face

And I can tell

She loves it.

The simple beauty

Of a simple thing.



Submitted: April 23, 2010

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Bert Broomberg

Very good short poem. Somehow I think that if you are into this type of short poetry the form of the haiku or the tanka may be something you'd enjoy writing.

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