The Irish Maiden

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

About a girl that has a family burden in her hands.


There she is

Standing by the door

As the chilly wind blows

The rain crashes down

Like the ruins of a fought castle

The rain splashes onto the forgotten battles

The bloodshed

The tears cried from the pain


Into her own possession,

As if she never had chosen it

Her dress sways to the whistle

Her emerald green eyes

They seek hope

As if there wasn’t such a thing

The Irish castle towers the green

As their strong accents show their desire

Not only Irish

The seeking girl

Submitted: August 07, 2012

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This is very good, and I love the way you detailed the girl! read some of my writing ! & comment what you think ! xx thanks !

Tue, August 7th, 2012 7:41pm


Thanks and I will

Sun, August 12th, 2012 4:13pm

nova scrotia

I really like this poem. The last four lines are very resounding.

Wed, August 8th, 2012 1:32am


Thanks! And a big thanks! :D

Sun, August 12th, 2012 4:12pm

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