I don't know where he is....i don't even know who he is...butu i know what kinda man he will be....the one destined for me

<3 ~kele~

Confused about today,

Cofused about tomorrow,

Confused about the days that follow,

what about the months and years to come

i know i shouldn't thinks so far but my confusion makes me wonder

it makes my mind wander to places i rather it not be,

esspecially me wondering how you feel about me

Can I ask you something I really don't know what you would say, but my heart yearns fo rthe answer, the answer I need today

Can I trust you with my heart?

Can you be my knight in shining armor, nah bump that forget the damsel in distress

I just need a real man, No S on his chest

I need a man of GOD because I want give my heart without consulting him

So tell me do you really think you can make my gray skies blue, can you honestly say you are feelin me as strongly as I feel you

Love is REAL it isn't no joke so in order to be with me you need to know

I'm not looking for relations I NEED a relationship, and your name is not gonna be DADDI, I already have one even tho he ain't worth shit

In our union it not about a one over the other thing is a give and take equation "are you hearin me"

I want tobe able to say "what a man, what a man"....he treats me like a QUEEN...he knows

how to treat a lady...cuz his momma taught him that

Do trust if you give me what i need, you will be put on the throne you deserve to be

Once again I'm confused because who is this man I'm dreaming for, wanting for, prayin for.....

Confused about today

Confused about tomorrow

Confused about the days that follow

buy my confusions STOPS when it comes to the right kind ofman that is destined to have my heart


Submitted: November 20, 2008

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uluvme2dou

Good poem, keep it up.

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 6:14am

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thanxs for reading and comment...

Sat, November 22nd, 2008 10:20pm

kristal

Wow! that was really amazing!! You write with raw emotion,that was great! Keep it up!! :-)

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 2:21pm

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thanxs...i really appreciate your comment b/c i respect it b/c i believe you a good writer...

Mon, November 24th, 2008 8:14am

Caycee

Wow, that was really sweet. Alot of girls probably feel that way, good poem! Good job! :]

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 3:58pm

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yea i hope ever girl feels that way...lol...thanxs for reading and commenting

Mon, November 24th, 2008 8:18am

CheetahBear

Wow I really liked it(and I don't even like reading poems) but that was really cool, I like how you said you don't want a knight in shining armor or a man with the s on his chest, just a man of god...really awesome! Keep up the great work!

Sun, November 23rd, 2008 5:01pm

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thanxs for reading...glad that you enjoyed it b/c i respect you as writer and i'm glad you like my poem

Mon, November 24th, 2008 8:17am

Perry Fowler

There is alot of power in your poem. I am like Cheetah Bear, I am not big on poetry, but this was great. I see alot to come from you in the future!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 4:31am

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wow...THANXS...for reading and and i'm glad you liked it

Mon, November 24th, 2008 8:15am

makemebreakme555

wow! this poem is amazing. i feel the exact same way, couldn't there be a man like that in this world. If there is one then where the hell is he? I'm not looking for perfection, just the right one.

Wed, November 26th, 2008 11:15pm

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hahaha...i'm right there with you...thanxs for reading and commenting

Wed, November 26th, 2008 7:50pm

AddieWestwood

absolutly beautiful...you have a very wonderful talent..that i greedily want to snatch...im not really all that great when it comes to writing poems...but you do it very well...now if only i can find a man like that! lol

Thu, November 27th, 2008 1:15am

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thanxs for reading...and i enjoy reading your stories...thanxs again for commenting

Wed, November 26th, 2008 7:49pm

forevamore123

wow i love your writing style its freakin amazing!

its deep, and its the truthful.

keep it up!

Thu, December 4th, 2008 12:32am

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thanxs so much for reading and commenting and i'm glad you like it...

Thu, December 4th, 2008 7:32am

Belladonna Secret

That was awesome but why dont you try your hand at a novel it would be the best.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 5:27pm

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you're right but i have to get a idea first..and then i have to write it lol...but as for now i stick to this...lol...thanxs for reading and commenting tho

Sun, December 7th, 2008 9:36am

RoxiGurl

Wow, amazing!! *claps* This is really based on life, keep it up!

?Dels

Wed, December 10th, 2008 2:15am

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thanxs...again...lol...for reading and commenting

Wed, December 10th, 2008 10:56am

Gadzookziie Spice 99

WOW! ThAt is really good! You write really deep! I love it x x

Wed, February 11th, 2009 7:49am

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thank you so much....i appreciate you reading and commenting

Sat, February 14th, 2009 5:15pm

Brian W

I think most girls have these thoughts at some stage. A good poem and it flowed well, I hope you find that man

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 5:03am

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thanxs for reading and commenting...and they should have those thoughts..

Fri, March 6th, 2009 7:22pm

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