Beyond Hidden Death

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
I wrote this a long, long time ago...and I have no idea why i choose now to bring it back from the dead...but ok...this is the first part....It may be confusing now, but i hope it comes together in the next parts...just TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF THE BEGINING...because if I don't know if anyone likes it, i probobly wont post more...

Submitted: March 12, 2007

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In an unknown garden, possibly, oblivions garden, she rested. She opened tear clouded eyes and the only thing in sight was a blinding darkness. Although, her body seemed to be numb, she felt an ache, a throbbing, somewhere, deep within herself. Lying, almost alone, under the blackness, she felt as though she was lying in the secret, yet equally sacred, rhelm of her own mind, within a land of subconscience decay. Although, she did not lay, she floated. So far gone, so far away, the women pondered, literally mindlessly, if she was in the state of a dream, because her being and her feeling so surreal, yet so seemingly pretend, she could draw no conclusions.


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